Video Critique

As a class, we viewed my video and I leanred a great deal about what I needed to change on my educational philosophy video. For starters, my voice needs to be louder and my words to be slowed down. This wasn't evident to me when I previewed my video, but it was very evident to me in class, and my class mates made it even move evident. Also, I need to change the music. While I liked it and thought it worked at home, I see now that it's not as "professional" as I would like it to be.